Sunday, February 19, 2012

Dream Story

I felt like writing out the whole story would have take pages and pages so I broke it up into 7 story points.

1. Girl wakes up and realizes she is dead.

2. She is automatically given a task to do. She is now responsible for carrying the burdens of the living who have lost a loved one. She finds this task is not desriable and wants to find out more about these "tasks"

3. She asks other dead people she encounters and everyone tells her the same thing: you don't wanna mess with that. The man in charge rules over everything. You can't change it and you don't want to mess with him. No one knows how to reach him and no one wants to know how. No one knows how to escape. But there is talk about some spirits that disappear, and no one knows what  has happened to them since.

4. She figures that if she purposely does not do her task then the guy in charge will have to call her up. So she does. And she is called. She is taken to a building where the big man resides. At the entrance to the building there is a big white glowing hallway. She asks the person next to here what that is. They say to here that any one that goes through there is never seen again. No one knows whats on the other side of that door.

5. She is taken to a room where she will meet with the guy in charge. She sits at a desk with a light shining only on her, and then a voice speaks to her. Its the man in charge. She gets lectured. She tries to negotiate with the big guy but he doesn't budge. She realizes this is going nowhere, so she gets up and makes a run for it.

6. She busts the door open and starts to run down the hall, towards the big white glowing door. People stare at her as she goes by. No one tries to stop her. She comes up to the door and goes through. Big white flash. Everything is blank.

7. Now in a hospital rooms, a mother looks at her newborn child who just happens to resemble the girl from the story.

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